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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-10-08 01:02 PM



Loves Timeless Devotion

When sunsets bid adieu
Upon the ocean blue
Sharing precious time
Together we value

When viewing starlight
Each brought a glow
In the still of the night
Time seems to slow

Of those special times
Beneath stars above
Cherishing moments
Embracing in love

In moon silvery shine
We dance and sway
It is times such as this
We longed to stay

We wished upon stars
Gazed moonbeams
Fulfilling  pleasures
Capturing dreams

As moonlight reflects
A glistening ocean  
Love hearts entwine
In timeless devotion


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-10-08 02:11 PM


"When viewing starlight
Each brought a glow
In the still of the night
Time seems to slow"
I love this, and am keeping the whole poem, thank you!


BloomingRose
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2 posted 2002-10-08 02:28 PM


Very mellow and lovely to read!

Deb

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-10-08 02:31 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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