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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-10-07 05:37 PM

You no longer grin,
Great Man.
Fiction is your history.

We know not your mind,
Great Man.
You are naught but glory.

Knowledge is hard work,
Great Man.
You are cipher, guidepost.

Truth is a small fib,
Great Man,
we write larger than most.

You no longer laugh,
Great Man.
Humor is no cause.

We can only guard,
Great Man,
ourselves from your flaws.

It is not your fault,
Great Man.
Name so legendary.

No one can become
Great Man.
Leaders keep you scary.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-10-07 07:23 PM

Impact!
A well thought banter placed well in this style. ThisDiamond

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-07 08:32 PM

Very awesome write Mike

Cold hands means a warm heart

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2002-10-07 08:41 PM

very cool read.

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

4 posted 2002-10-07 09:31 PM

Mike....this is great work. Enjoyed very much.
Nice pic ...

H.

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

5 posted 2002-10-07 09:43 PM

you leave quite an impression, wordsmith...enjoyed this!
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-10-07 09:59 PM

Very well done Mikey.
Love the new pic!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-10-08 11:47 AM

Thanks, everyone. Glad you enjoyed the poem and the pic.

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

8 posted 2002-10-08 02:59 PM

Y've got moving words, baby. Still can't get over th' pic.

Love you immensely. Wish we could talk 'fore Thursday.

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2002-10-08 03:11 PM

Mir auch, baby. But at least we have Thursday Friday Saturday uninterrupted.

I love you...

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