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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-10-08 11:12 AM


(I got the inspiration for this from a BBMAK song.)

I can't make him believe
Our love is perfect
Because it isn't
But we still love each other
No matter how bad things get

I can't make him believe
That we actually made it
We lasted a whole year
And we are still happy

I can't make him believe
That at first I didn't want a realationship
Because of all the horrid things
I was put through by guys
But he is the first guy
I actually fell hard for

I can't make him believe
He has to believe it for himself
If he wants to

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2002-10-08 12:13 PM


Yup, you got that right ... he's gotta wanta

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-08 12:16 PM


Reading this, would certainly help him believe it!

EA

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3 posted 2002-10-09 08:45 PM




(big hugggssssss) And I wish for him to believe with all his heart to want to love you always with faith and sincerity! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully touching, sweet friend, wishing you both the best, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-09-2002 08:45 PM).]

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