Open Poetry #22 |
Prophecy To Harvest |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In the palm of his hand sparkled brightly this gem Held wide open and outright, carried out to the glen And surrounded by magic in the colors of fall Stood the harvest clad sentries in full view one and all In the moments enchanted stood this prince and princess Full of wonder and hopeful, so wide-eyed with impress And they stood close together in the sound of the sun Taking in the surroundings, sharing gleefully done In the palm of his hand to remain of her own Giving all of romance, to spring forth and be shown And she touched him so deeply by this moment in time As they stood there together in this setting sublime In his eyes filled her image, translucent and pure Full of all of the truths he had been searching for And she kissed him so softly in the dew of the day Taking all of his fears cast to past far away In the palm of his hand filled the tears that they cried Giving all to each other, every rush undenied And together they lay in the meadow through night As the autumn cooled slightly, every joy with delight Copyright Kkh 10/09/02 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is enchanting! So romantic! Beautifully written. EA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
vivid!!! love the line about romance springing forth couple lines could be adjusted to keep the meter running Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"In the palm of his hand filled the tears that they cried Giving all to each other, every rush undenied And together they lay in the meadow through night As the autumn cooled slightly, every joy with delight" (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, it also brought a tear to my eye because it is so sensitive and gorgeous and had me dreaming of my love! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I always like how you sneak these posts in before I get home.....while part of the rest of the world is AT WORK....But I am sure that won't remain forever... Nicely romantic harvest in the fall of year when the nights cool...yet romance warms and blooms..... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very beautiful Kathleen. So soft and lovely... If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, this is SO beautiful. Of course, it makes me think of my own Love. Thanks for sharing this romantic poem with us. With Love To All, Ethel....garysgirl |
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