Open Poetry #22 |
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Sad Feelings |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA ![]() |
I saw my grandmother For the last time It was a good visit But I couldn't hug her good-bye You might ask Why couldn't you hug her good-bye Because I caught a cold And if I hugged her She would get it and die What a crime All I could do Was wave good-bye From afar How sad is that For a final Good-bye Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
the_loner_23 Good thought, good write, good read. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The thoughtfulness of the goodbye was there, It seems we always think we’ll see them again, It’s only when we don’t, Is when we regret. Gloom |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Take heart my friend...good bye is always hard. Strength and courage to you and Grandma, as I the point is the effort and love invested. All good wishes, ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Good work the-loner-23. You wrote your feelings very well. I do think, though, that your Grandmother knew how very much you loved her and that the love you had for her was the reason you just waved instead of hugged. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. With Love, Ethel |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Much irony in this goodbye. You hugged her with this write, Julie. |
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Sinful_Steph Junior Member
since 2002-10-03
Posts 35Toronto, Ontario (Canada) |
I don't know what to say....this write made me cry. I lost my grandmother earlier this year. I spoke to her two days before she was gone and I didn't get the chance to tell her good-bye or that I loved her. It was a very sad time, and it still hurts that she's not around. Thank you for sharing this. This poem found it's way to my heart. "Love me little, Love me long, Is the burden of my song" - Robert Herrick |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
How very touching ![]() Pat without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Julie, I'm so sorry to hear this, sweet friend, but I know with all my heart that your grandma knew how you would have hugged her and that she knows you love her so much and you did the best thing for the both of you! (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) I am here if you need someone to talk to, sweet friend, God Bless You Both, I send angel hugs to your grandma, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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