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Open Poetry #22

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Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2002-10-08 08:01 AM

Whether weather is hot to trot through fluently
or blue stale skies fly awkwardly by,
recruit on route to my side bay,

more rain for me and fine by me
today and

tomorrow is a replay,

repeat,

replay,

a sunsetting zen of drought
wrought by lime line winds on range
or a Sausalito libido temp change,

all is well in my necked woods
northeast of the beast blooming
out of season,

replete.

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-10-08 09:53 AM

I love this autumn song! Especially that beast part.

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

2 posted 2002-10-08 09:55 AM

Thank you, Midnitesun. *s
The 'beast' was in reference to Hurricane Lili. Thankfully, I wasn't in its path.

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-10-08 10:55 AM

I like the descriptiveness in this poem. It is an awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

4 posted 2002-10-08 02:15 PM

the_loner_23-- Thank you and happy you enjoyed! *s

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