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Polka Dots in Disarray
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Polka Dots in Disarray |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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The summer of her discontent a circle game of circumvent of polka dots in disarray reeling in surreal, displayed across the Bay of Mandalay that drew her near and faraway scattering her loves lament connected to her hearts content tortured by her tormenting in contrast of her contemplating accenting her own argument to care enough and give consent framed inside her own event a picture perfect paradise in time where love eludes~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think my polka dots are in disarray now...James |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Lori, this felt so very sad, sweet friend, I know how heatbreak can accent arguments like that and arise such doubt and I pray faith again returns to those who feel like this and love will again be within grasp forever! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love it Lori!! The title pulled me in and the words are brilliant! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Another wonderfully written blues serenade! There are many quote-worthy lines, here are a few: "The summer of her discontent a circle game of circumvent of polka dots in disarray reeling in surreal, displayed..." EA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I see them all the time and cannot tell if they are in disarray or not  I love your work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
simply mahhhhvalous the way you pick almost any subject and can turn it into wonderful prose. I especially enjoyed the metaphor of how a 'connect-the-dots' puzzle cannot be accomplished if the numbers are not in order. There is only one writer that writes like you, Lor, and that is a VERY good thing! *smiles* Jeff |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Have so missed seeing you here, I go lost in this (all good) it really drew me in....  sweet lady...be wellLauren~ I need some distraction |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I think my polka dots are in permanent disarray... It must be a poet thing... A very beautiful write  ~polka dot chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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