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Open Poetry #22

The Sobre Wench

Streen
Member

since 2001-11-28

Posts 169

0 posted 2002-10-07 02:48 PM

The Sobre Wench

She chirped a song çe martin,
full of 'Oui, monsieur' and françs
and double entendre

(and if you
can believe it she even sang
a nocturne.)

--a sobre setting to cap
the night's revelry.

[This message has been edited by Streen (10-07-2002 07:32 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-07 02:48 PM

Good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-07 03:02 PM

Very good, Streen.
Best Wishes,
Ethel...garysgirl

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

3 posted 2002-10-07 03:35 PM

enjoyed the read.

El riesgo vive siempre!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-10-07 07:30 PM

Always enjoy your work. Clever and fresh.ThisDiamond

Streen
Member

since 2001-11-28

Posts 169

5 posted 2002-10-07 07:40 PM

Thank you everyone! I'm always trying to do something new with my technique, always trying to expand my horizons with every poem I write. And, based on your kind comments, I apparently have with this latest poem. Again, thank you all for replying to my poem!

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