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The Crimson Knight
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0 posted 2002-09-30 12:58 PM


On the chair by the door
~drapes my black leather jacket
~ ~it’s my old traveling comfort,
by the bed on the floor
~piles her white silk and lace,
~ ~the dim of candles lights the place.
On the handmade cotton quilt
~gently touch we learn by feel
~ ~the emotional that is so real,
In satin sleep without guilt
~I wake to whisper of the wind
~ ~and desire rises to take a spin.
To feel the rushing air of speed
~on open spaces the feel of free,
~ ~it ever calls softly to me.
The longing is almost a need,
~to fill my body with the vibrations
~ ~I stay half awake with mixed emotions.
I leave warmth behind in the bed
~and touch the cool of leather there
~ ~patiently waiting the night air.
From soft pillow she raises her head,
~and calls me sweetly back to lace
~ ~and I know I can’t resist her smiling face


© Copyright 2002 Dirk Bishop - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2002-09-30 01:03 PM


choices, choices...
I enjoyed this

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2 posted 2002-09-30 01:57 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo lovely, sweet friend, true love always shines through your heartfelt words, this is spellbinding, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dirk, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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The Crimson Knight
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3 posted 2002-09-30 04:27 PM


Thanx Sea and Noah for the kind words.
Although some choices are tuff, some are easy, like this poem the words came tuff but the postin was easy

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standing on a shadow's lace
4 posted 2002-10-05 12:13 PM


a little leather...a little lace...
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5 posted 2002-10-06 11:31 PM


I enjoyed this touch of leather and lace.
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6 posted 2002-10-07 12:51 PM


Crimson Knight, I loved your poem. Of course, I would, being the romantic that I am. I'm really glad of the choice you made at the end!!!!! Thanks.
Love to all,
Ethel...garysgirl

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7 posted 2002-10-07 01:53 AM


I think the right choice was made.
Enjoyed the poem!
Thanks for sharing!

regards2you
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8 posted 2002-10-07 03:08 AM


I think you put the words together beautifully; I like this a lot.

Pat

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ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2002-10-07 07:29 PM


A delicious capsule of freedom, love and lace. ThisDiamond
The Crimson Knight
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10 posted 2002-10-07 07:32 PM


Dang, I had forgot all about this, and I want to thank you all for reading and responding to it.  Been out of touch for a bit, but don’t let my slow response to you guys and dolls take from the warmth of my thanks
Enchantress
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11 posted 2002-10-07 07:42 PM


Dang!  Leather or lace???  
What a decision to have to make...
But I do believe you made the right one.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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