Open Poetry #22 |
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Oh, Saraswati (A Peace mantra) |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia ![]() |
Oh Saraswati, Guide us to Our Shantiniketan, For we are lost and cannot find The pathway Through the choking Forest of Hate That engulfs this world. We know that Love must be The right pathway, But we often see more Hate than Love Sowing seeds On fertile ground. Oh Saraswati, We beg of you to Shine your light Onto this river of Life That rushes inside Our warring minds, That we may all find An open stream, A clear pathway To Peace. *********** May ripples of LOVE become waves of PEACE [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (10-07-2002 12:25 PM).] |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
One I got around trying to pronounce the words I enjoyed your piece, as usual ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sorry for tying up your tongue. ![]() Saraswati is the Hindu goddess of knowledge and of the arts, and shantiniketan means abode or house of peace. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very peaceful. I like it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm glad you found it peaceful, Julie. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I'm going to follow you, I'm looking for that peace. '... That we may all find An open stream, A clear pathway To Peace...' I love this...hugs and peace be with you. Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Amen" to this beautiful poem you have written! EA |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Martie, EA, thanks! Mayebe if we all repeat that word PEACE several hundred times a day? |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) Oh Kacy, this is a wonderfully touching mantra, sweet friend, I too wish for the peace to fill every stream and canal of life of every mans blood, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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paladin![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
When you find the peace within yourself you can begain to nogotiate peace with the world. paladin |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Just had to say, I love this one!! ![]() All writing comes |
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