Open Poetry #22 |
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Out Of No Where (repost) |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State ![]() |
Today I am feeling a bit unnerved, uptight and just down right panicky. I was trying to pen my feelings when I discovered I couldn’t concentrate long enough to pen a darned thing. Then I remembered posting this a while back and thought I would just repost it instead of driving my self even crazier trying to write today. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Out of no where, it hits Uncontrollable fits Blasting through like a train- Fast racing heart Palpitations now start Unbearable, acute chest pain- Muscles ever tense Vision is so dense Breathlessness now begins- Feeling dizzy and weak With a feverish cheek Sensations of needles and pins- Sweaty and hot Trembling non-stop Can’t stop hyperventilation- Vision now tunnel Looking through a funnel Feelings of depersonalization- An end is in sight Put an end to this fight As fast as it came, it went- Over once more I hit the floor Mind and body totally spent- My turbulent ride I cannot hide No cure for me in sight- So I just sit and wait As if it were fate For my next frightful flight- ~Sheri |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Irie, I am certainly glad that you re-posted this. You certainly have a way with words. You are very good. Thanks for sharing. With love and Best Wishes, Ethel |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Wonderful penned. ![]() The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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T Member
since 2000-04-27
Posts 107USA |
A very turbulent read indeed. Some R&R is what you need. ![]() T. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I would suggest at least several weeks of relaxation with your muse. . . good to see you again. . . ![]() ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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