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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-10-07 06:45 AM

The Eye of I

I cannot suave my sanity
Nor out run my humanity.
I wait the fate of pendulums swing
And the angst that it will bring

I cannot stop the spill of rhyme
Nor can I stop the sands of time.
I wait upon an ageless sea
And watch reflections aging me.

I fly within a minds abyss
On the wings of a lovers kiss
And only vagueness shows the goal
And only mist surrounds my soul.

The path I walk is eye to I
O’er valley’s green and sails of sigh
And only time does hold my hand
And offered me a wedding band

So why remains the mast of now
And I remain the path of how.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-10-07 07:19 AM

And only time does hold my hand
And offered me a wedding band

So why remains the mast of now
And I remain the path of how.
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and those will be my waaay cool lines for the day...
and...I have said many times...seeing things your wise "eye of I" grants us vision to see into the wisdom of why.
The view of you makes this moth sigh.

makes me winkie too

*ww*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-10-07 08:33 AM

Sy..your wise words of wisdom I long for each morning...
Just as I long for the sun to rise...
And always like magic you appear...
To calm me and set me on the right track for the day ahead..
Thank you dear poet sir..
You are a love.
~Morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-10-07 09:49 AM

OOOOHHHHH, Seymour....this is SOOOOOOOOOO beautiful...just as is all your work I've seen. Your love and compassion just flow out of you. Music to my heart. Thanks so much for sharing and teaching!!!
Love to all,
Ethel...garysgirl

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-10-07 10:21 AM

JM,
"The view of you makes this moth sigh."
And the words of you make this butterfly fly.
WWRS

:kis:

Enchantress
And what would I do without my morning hugs from you.

Ethel,
My thanks to you for the read and like.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2002-10-07 01:19 PM

Well done, Sy. Well done indeed!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-10-07 01:25 PM

I enjoyed your eye's view.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-10-07 01:41 PM

Thank you Interloper

Midnitesun
Glad you enjoyed my eyes view.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2002-10-07 01:50 PM

Wonderful Sey !!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

9 posted 2002-10-07 02:27 PM

Brilliant. Each 'line' you write is a volume of poetry in and of itself, to re-read and ponder. What a delight.
Like having a delicious meal, savoring each course, and when you think you cannot eat another bite, dessert, your closings. So full, now I have to go take a nap. I enjoy your poetry trememdously and, like others, look forward to the next. Thanks for making our day.

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2002-10-07 02:36 PM

Seymour~

'I cannot stop the spill of rhyme
Nor can I stop the sands of time.
I wait upon an ageless sea
And watch reflections aging me.'

Oh dearest man ... you've written me to a 'T'~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

11 posted 2002-10-07 02:38 PM

Awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2002-10-07 05:48 PM

Chris.
Thank you so much.

Pat,
Just love your comments

Marge.
Enjoyed your reply.

the_loner_23,
Awesome is good. LOL

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