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regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

0 posted 2002-10-06 11:04 AM

I only want
to walk in the rain with you,
holding your hand,
feeling your presence.
I just need
to run through fields,
laughing and playing tag
with you catching me
as we collapse in a heap
of giggles
and deep passion.
I only want
to caress your face,
to kiss you tenderly
under night's twinkling eyes,
and let the moonlight
magically capture and magnify
our completeness.
I only want to love you.

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-10-06 11:10 AM

Amen! I love this! I wish I had written this poem because that is exactly how I feel (and act!) when I am in love.

Absolutely delightful!!!

EA

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2002-10-06 11:11 AM

Wonderful sentiments! I adore writes like this one. They are inspiring to the heart.

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-10-06 11:14 AM

Your "only wants" are lovely...now write about what happens when you get what you want...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2002-10-06 12:00 PM

Very nice read. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

5 posted 2002-10-06 11:51 PM

I only want
to caress your face,
to kiss you tenderly
under night's twinkling eyes,
and let the moonlight
magically capture and magnify
our completeness.
I only want to love you.
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I love this poem.
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"I write for others, capturing their feelings. Did I?"
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That was from your critque box (I'm sure you know that lol) I must say you most certainly did. This is a poem I would give to a lover. It's beautiful. I also wanted to thak you for the lovely reply you left on my 300th post. It was the biggest compliment I EVER recieved hearing that you were so moved by my poem that you went and looked up all my previous posts. I thank you from the bottom of my poetic heart for that. It left me with a great feeling. It also has caused me to be on the computer all night reading and writing poetry. And I thank you for that as well. I don't check Passions very often so if you wouldn't mind, I would enjoy if you would e-mail me a poem whenever you feel like it. I was very impressed by your writing, as well. That way I can be sure not to miss your posts. My e-mail addy is dum8blonde@yahoo.com
Thanx for sharing.
~Krissie

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-10-07 12:19 PM

Fabulous expression...James

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2002-10-07 02:18 AM

Earth Angel and Krishankins....thank you both so much. When I re-read myself I sigh.

Sunshine, short of a bedroom scene which I probably have someplace around here, how is this: My poem: HE, just posted for you..thanks

Nightshade, so glad you enjoyed it.

AniKay (Krissie) so glad to hear from you. Sorry, my e-mail is private, however, that is a good reason for you to start posting regularly here. Also glad to hear about you reading and writing all night. One of the healthiest things we can do for ourselves is to use our gifts, giving back to life...You are in my prayers.
With Warm Regards, Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-10-07 02:39 PM

regards2you, I LOVE this poem. Your love in your heart pours out to all of us. Thank you very much for sharing this with us.

With Love and Best Wishes,
Ethel....Garys Lady...garysgirl

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

9 posted 2002-10-07 03:13 PM

What agreat words dear.. I really love it very much..
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I only want
to walk in the rain with you,
holding your hand,
feeling your presence
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So sensitive feelings.
Nice work..
Hugesss

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2002-10-07 04:13 PM

This is lovely and I enjoyed the playing tag part of it. Love is often playful and you've expressed it well.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star,

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