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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-10-07 02:12 PM

And all my resolve
came tumbling down
because you smiled
because you spoke
the images, feelings
you evoke
crumbled my facade

And all my hopes
just turned to dust
around my feet
blew away
for I've learned
again this day
I love you still
please help me,
God....

~Tier
6/99

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-07 02:15 PM

Very good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-07 02:16 PM

Tier, I love your work. You relay your feelings so well. I enjoyed this very much. Thanks.
With Love To All,
Ethel...garysgirl

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2002-10-07 02:24 PM

Thanks Loner and Ethel...

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-10-07 02:26 PM

Um, has no one noticed this is from 1999?

I Still enjoyed it, though.

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

5 posted 2002-10-07 03:18 PM

Hey, God with u always.. I really love ur words... It's so sensitive feelings from u..

Hugessss

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2002-10-07 03:21 PM

You want an honest opinion?

OMG! I have tears running down my face, and, now my nose is running, too. I just got over being sick, looking like a walrus w. tissue stuck in both nostrils, which thoroughly delighted my grandchilden. (yes, I used meds)

This touched something so deep in me I did not know it was there. Get outta my soul.

I printed it, that's how good it is!

Truly wonderful. Thank You

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

7 posted 2002-10-07 03:32 PM

A very soft and touching piece. Nicely done.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-10-07 03:35 PM

Okay, now I feel reaaaally lousy for my short, pat reply.

You always plumb the depths
by writing the heights...

Mikey

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

9 posted 2002-10-07 03:39 PM

a tender write, enjoyed.

El riesgo vive siempre!

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2002-10-07 04:08 PM

Wonderful! I've been there also.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star,

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