Open Poetry #22 |
Gone is the Green |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Gone is the Green Gone are woods of summer green Of tree and fern, lush and serene Into the opulence of fall A grandeur to be seen by all But amber, bronze of windswept fields The swish of dancing grains it yields A sunrise cast upon the whole The place it rests within the soul The harmony of sight and sound That spins October leaves around In lyrics of its lullabies Rest only in a poet’s eyes Elizabeth Santos October 8, 2002 |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Elizabeth, Nicely done. Brings back memories of long ago, of an Ohio autumn. Oh, I can see my breath and want one more jump into the leave pile, eagerly waiting the pumpkins and that Harvest moon...was without doubt my favorite season of "back east", especially the dramatic change of colors. Thanks without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautiful, as always, Liz. My favorite times of the year are spring and fall. Spring, because that is when the flowers bloom. And fall, because of all of the colorful leaves. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I remember a poem I did...some time back, with you sitting at a desk, writing wonderful poems, just like this one...I think it's time to bring it back, dust it off, a re-dedication of sorts... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is so wondrously lyrical and poetic. Simply lovely! EA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LovelyLizzyLady~ You are BEAUTIFUL~ This is just the loveliest of word-thoughts~ Thank you for sharing YOU with us~ I love you, lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Liz, this is as beautiful as this crisp Fall morning in New England. A day when all seems right with the world. It bodes well with my cup of tea. Hugs to you, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Liz, I love this beautiful poem of my favorite season of the year. You have painted a picture in my mind and put a song in my heart. Thanks much. Love to all, Ethel....garysgirl |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hello Liz, You wrote about my favorite season and I know overthere in the woods of Pensylvania Autumn must look awsome. Titia I miss you mucho Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You keep tempting me to come down there and make a leaf house with you on your yard so we can kick it all over the place. Be careful what you wish for, it may come true Howdy Neighbour |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Regards2you, Thanks for the memories... Small Chick, I agree with you. I love them both Thank you! Sunshine, You would be dusting off my memory. It's very cloudy these days. Thank you dear, I would love to read it Earth Angel, Very nice comment, Thank you Marge, Thoughts have been with you, Glad you liked the poem Marti, Thanks, perhaps you'll join me in a cup of tea some day Ethel, This was worth writing, just to make your spirit dance. Thanks Titia, Sweet Lady on the Belgium border, I hope you come back, The tree house misses you. Mysteria, I hope you do come back. If you wait too long, we'll be jumping in the snow HUgs to all Liz |
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