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CSKpoet
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0 posted 2002-10-05 01:23 PM







amber, red and gold
a colorful tapestry
carpets forest floor

leaves gliding in the wind
and sliding down poles
delightful playground of trees

rosy cheeked children
laughter in the crisp fall air
jump in crunchy piles


Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa


[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (10-05-2002 01:35 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-05 01:25 PM


I can see it all so clearly. You have described my favourite season very well. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

CSKpoet
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2 posted 2002-10-05 01:30 PM


Thank you, Chris! Wish I was there to see fall..I miss it! It was 90 something in Honolulu yesterday...eeek! That will make me FALL...
smiles, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-05 01:37 PM


Yep! That's a typical, fun-filled, fall day for me!

Enjoyed this very much!

Linda

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4 posted 2002-10-05 01:40 PM


Thanks Linda ...go jump in the leaves for me too

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

WhiteRose
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5 posted 2002-10-05 02:31 PM


I love this Cher, very beautiful. You are a master of weave in the colors of fall.
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6 posted 2002-10-05 06:12 PM



Sometimes, when we miss something, or someone, so much...our words seem to be that much more poignant...such as this...thank you Cher...wish you could be here to share...

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7 posted 2002-10-05 07:39 PM


Ya painted it perfectly....very nicely done
Cher...

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8 posted 2002-10-05 10:10 PM


A perfect picture of the season...my favorite of all. You surely did it proud.
ThisDiamond

CSKpoet
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9 posted 2002-10-05 10:19 PM


White Rose, Sunshine, Magnus, thisdiamond:

I sure appreciate the remarks and yes Fall is the best with Spring causing a tie for 1st place.

winter can be too long and summer too hot
picky people aren't we? (grins)

much aloha and hugs to all,
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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10 posted 2002-10-05 11:42 PM


Cher, you painted a picture of words as beautiful as the picture above your words!! I enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

With Love,
Ethel

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