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DarkShroud
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0 posted 2002-09-25 08:53 PM


Monsters

Monsters are in my cereal
Munching at my cornflakes
Monsters are in my cereal
Lapping at my milk
Monsters are in my cereal
Stealing my spoon
Monsters are in my cereal
Stealing my bowl
Now there are no more monsters
For my cereal, bowl and spoon are all gone!

DS
7-6-02

© Copyright 2002 Avayon Thorp - All Rights Reserved
JasonE
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since 2002-09-14
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1 posted 2002-09-25 09:00 PM


heheh.  cute poem.  Thanks for sharing it with us.  And Welcome!  I hope you feel as happy and welcomed as i did when i joined.  

[This message has been edited by JasonE (09-25-2002 09:01 PM).]

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-09-25 09:02 PM



Welcome to Passions.  Seems like you've got some comic wit, and that is always appreciated!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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3 posted 2002-09-25 09:03 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, I love this, this is so cute, but do they have your Eggo waffle? (smiles) This is a delightful debut, sweet friend, we all come across monsters one time or another, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Avayon, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to hear more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Avayon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Miah
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4 posted 2002-09-25 09:04 PM


Hope there are no monsters anymore.  Cool poem.  Welcome to passions.  hugs to you.


DarkShroud
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5 posted 2002-10-01 12:17 PM


JasonE-------thanks

Sunshine------thanks so much for the card,
              I love it!

Noah------(giggles) I still got my eggo!  lol

Miah------Thanks  (hugs you back)

Thanks for the warm welcome and the encouragement, all of you!

DS

Enotneicna
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6 posted 2002-10-01 12:25 PM


Avi.....great first choice......I told you you could do it...you're gonna love it here, I do.

Much love and many blessings
friends always
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



Hearts_Dance
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since 2002-09-30
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7 posted 2002-10-01 12:31 PM


Monsters can be cute you know. Have you seen Monsters Inc? I thought I was a bit old to watch it, but watched with my child. It was a darling movie!

Midnitesun
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8 posted 2002-10-01 01:14 AM


Hey, welcome to you! Monsters sure can be silly sometimes. I'm hiding my cereal bowl next time I read your poem.
DarkShroud
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9 posted 2002-10-06 01:06 AM


Eno-----yea you told me and thanks.


Hearts_Dance------haven't seen it yet.  I have a one year old girl and am about to hatch my second girl----feels like any second now!


Midnitesun------Thanks for the welcome---hide your cereal bowl----lol---cute!

DS

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