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regards2you
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0 posted 2002-10-05 01:11 PM



Love
doesn't just die.
It lingers on
like glowing embers
of a night fire
slowly losing the energy
that made it so intense.
like deadly drops of ice water,
too many hurts, misunderstandings
and selfish drives
gradually squelch its warmth
leading to the inevitable
morning of its demise.
And there is no
rekindling
that can ever
start it
again!



without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-05-2002 06:14 PM).]

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Auguste
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1 posted 2002-10-05 01:39 PM


Wise words!  It's a pleasure to read you.
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-05 01:47 PM


I believe this may be the first poem of yours that I have read. It is very well done! Welcome to your new extended family!

P.S. This poem would have looked good centred. When writing out a poem, check the Formatting area above the writing box and change the alignment from Left to Centre. Then preview your poem before you submit it so that you can be sure that it will look the way you would like it to appear.

Looking forward to reading more of your work!

Earth Angel

regards2you
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3 posted 2002-10-05 02:39 PM


To Auguste: Thanks again, and ditto....your line "If I've no wind, I'll use my breath" still trots through my mind ever so often. Wow!

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

regards2you
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4 posted 2002-10-05 02:49 PM


Earth Angel, thanks   also thanks for the advise re: alignment. I went back in thr. the editing icon after your post to me but able to find the center. When time allows I might just go in and delete the whole thing and start fresh. As soon as I saw it in print I was disappointed, because you are right; much better centered which is how it originally was when I first wrote it. And thanks for the welcome. I just read your senryu...so good..it is perfect. You are so talented, thanks for sharing it with us.

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

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5 posted 2002-10-05 06:15 PM


R2U...Hope you don't mind, but I went ahead and centered it for you...you can go back into "edit" and see how I did it, and then in the future, you, too, will have the secret!  Nice read!
regards2you
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6 posted 2002-10-05 07:03 PM


To Sunshine, Thank you so much. Though the poem comes on-screen I can't get the messages to come up on my screen; so I went into print and all the messages(posts) follow the poem. I truly appreciate you centering for me. I can barely see the icons on this webtv, tho. pics always look good. So, still not sure of the how-to, after it was posted. Looks so much nicer. God Bless You

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

WhiteRose
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7 posted 2002-10-05 07:36 PM


How very true, and you expressed it well.
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8 posted 2002-10-05 10:12 PM


Hello, Regards2you....I'm new here, too, but everybody just kind of takes us new ones under their wings, don't they? Everybody here is so kind and loving, don't you think? I've said it quite often the last few days, but this site is truly amazing to me. It truly is a "family of friends". I'm so glad to be a part of it. By the way, I can tell by your writing that you have a lot of love inside. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Best Wishes,
Ethel...........garysgirl

ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2002-10-05 10:15 PM


Have been enjoying your gifted writes. Look forward to more. ThisDiamond
regards2you
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10 posted 2002-10-05 10:53 PM


To WhiteRose, thanks

To Ethel, ah, you're so sweet; yes, it does seem like a loving family

To ThisDiamond, I am very happy you like this and others I've written.

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Auguste
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11 posted 2002-10-06 12:20 PM


regards2you, you're very sweet.  Thank you! I believe you also have the breath.
regards2you
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12 posted 2002-10-06 12:38 PM


Auguste....me thinks you are so right..  

you found me out so soon??? It takes one to know one. Big, big smiles to you, my friend..thanks

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

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