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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-10-05 12:14 PM



New Poet Richey v2
Getting Lost

Keth I think had a secret desire
To stir within a man a raging fire
And co-opted Krissy to assist her plan
To captivate the boot-checking man
There's no other reason that I can see
To go to Tampa constantly
Sunday night we were there five times in all
That has to be some kind of lover's call

Marsha

To be continued

© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-10-05 12:21 PM


Marsha,
You are always a delight to read.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2002-10-05 12:23 PM


HAHA, did you capture someone in Tampa?
with poetic lassos?

Krissy
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3 posted 2002-10-05 12:30 PM


Well done mum well you know me always getting lost and with four other people in the car too i like to make an impression on the whole state

love you always

krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Kethry
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4 posted 2002-10-05 12:51 PM


Marsha,
I claim absolution from the whole affair, if Krissy hadn't been there to set me on the narrow path who knows where we would have ended up - possibly in deep water. Still it was fun and your poem tells it like it is - maybe.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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5 posted 2002-10-06 12:57 PM


and what about you, Mushy? From what I hear you fell head over heels for a guy called Denny!! I hear you were over at his place every night!
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2002-10-10 06:08 PM


MarshaLove~
You KNOW I'm still laughing over this dilemma~
You girls just keep me laughing !
Come back ... come back !
(that is IF you all can find your way !)
Love n' huggers~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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the_loner_23
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7 posted 2002-10-10 06:19 PM


Enjoyed the read

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-10-10 06:58 PM


A great way to pick someone up... I must say
Very original!!!!
~ hugs from across the pond

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2002-10-10 07:28 PM



So they didn't get enough of this bootman then, figures.

Five times on one night??? Oh dear oh dear, that sounds serious business.

Love you all, Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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