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paladin
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0 posted 2002-10-10 10:43 AM



Act I

Our hands touch
Passing the salt
A spark jumped


Act II

Two hearts join
Walking together
Hand in hand


Act III

For ever
Living out our lifes
Till the end

Finis


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[This message has been edited by paladin (10-10-2002 08:46 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-10 01:17 PM




(smiles) Oh Robert, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may loves true essence always fill your heart and may the play never be re-written! (big huggssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-10-10 03:03 PM


I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2002-10-10 05:04 PM


To love and be loved
for this gift eternal thanks
to Heaven above.

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4 posted 2002-10-10 06:59 PM


love it

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