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Open Poetry #22

A play (in haiku)

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2002-10-10 10:43 AM

Act I

Our hands touch
Passing the salt
A spark jumped

Act II

Two hearts join
Walking together
Hand in hand

Act III

For ever
Living out our lifes
Till the end

Finis

paladin

[This message has been edited by paladin (10-10-2002 08:46 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-10-10 01:17 PM

(smiles) Oh Robert, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may loves true essence always fill your heart and may the play never be re-written! (big huggssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-10 03:03 PM

I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-10-10 05:04 PM

To love and be loved
for this gift eternal thanks
to Heaven above.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2002-10-10 06:59 PM

love it

Charisma

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