Open Poetry #22 |
Mizzle |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
OOhh, such a comparison with nature, Karilea. Your words are beautiful as always. Thank you. Ethel/garysgirl |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely and that last line is a "Pow!" Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"for in your thunder, I am warm"!! WOW!! OHMYGOSH!! Love this Karilea!! ~Big smiles and a hug~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Shining One....I do like this one...perfect! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kari, this was just such a sweet and beautiful read and just WONDERFUL! HUGGSSS If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This "Mizzle" has muzzled me!--I'm speechless!---and breathless! Linda |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I miss the drizzle, but there's nothing to miss in the soft heat of these words. *thunk* |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"for in your thunder, I am warm" I wish I'd written that line. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just love the soft caress of this poem, sweet friend, may the thunder of destiny always tremble in every heartbeat, this is gorgeous, we all loven you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like this poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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