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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-10-08 03:23 PM

Please,
Let me be
Do not exhale
Upon my silence
A lament
For I am weary

Close the door
softly,
Let me dream
Long forgotten wishes
Soon to be extinguished
From before these
tired eyes

Why cry?
I am neither
beginning or end
"Each one must
Carry his own.."
& I am alone

Don't try,
You will fail
& I don't care to
Apologize again for
My own personal sin
So please,

Just let me be...

~Tier
10/02

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."
[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (10-08-2002 03:24 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-08 03:31 PM

Very good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-10-08 03:34 PM

Very deep and insightful write Tiersdin. Well done!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2002-10-08 04:14 PM

Thank you both,

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

4 posted 2002-10-08 04:16 PM

Tier, very well written and much enjoyed.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-10-08 04:20 PM

Touching. I love your poetry.
Thank you.

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-10-08 04:28 PM

Nope.

I hope to bother you for a long, long time.

Take my Scare Me challenge. Please?

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2002-10-08 05:32 PM

Michael and Pat, thank you for for reading and commenting with such kind words. *hugs*

Mikey, I will take the challenge, calm down! *chuckles*

~Tier
10/02

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (10-08-2002 05:33 PM).]

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

8 posted 2002-10-08 05:38 PM

this is the kind of thing i really like - openly honest and no bs. well done you

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

9 posted 2002-10-08 05:45 PM

Hey Golden Voice, where have you been hiding? I've been waiting to read your next poem so that I can fall in love with it!

*hugs*
Thanks for the kind words

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2002-10-08 06:21 PM

Tiersdin, very good work. I love your style of writing.
With Love To All,
Ethel

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