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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-10-08 02:26 PM

I would
that I could touch
those places long cold
building warmth
where now lies void
freeing you
from the history told
word upon cutting word

I would
share the heat of me
if in sharing
it brought you back
from those regions
desolate
now devoid

I would be sunlight
to your cloud
letting the shadows waft
below our course
with soft touch on
earth or cheek
to passers by

I would
that the pain
could be mine
and you
free

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-08 02:30 PM

Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2002-10-08 02:47 PM

Captain, these are the words of one who truly cares...

lovely thoughts...

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2002-10-08 02:50 PM

this touches layers...your poetry always touches but this is cuttingly sweet and tender...i hope the one this is designed for reads them...helen

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-10-08 03:04 PM

quote:

I would be sunlight
to your cloud
letting the shadows waft
below our course
with soft touch on
earth or cheek
to passers by

Yes...

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

5 posted 2002-10-08 03:11 PM

Words of concern and love, Cpat Hair….
Encouraging and wonderfully penned.

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-10-08 03:16 PM

Cpat Hair, these words are so beautiful....and written with such love and compassion. I believe you really mean them, too. I hope whoever inspired them believes you, too.
Best Wishes With love,
Ethel/garysgirl

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2002-10-08 03:23 PM

Today? I would let you---
(oh shush...I pretend everything is for me--good and bad...)

?

A beautiful voice from a lovely spirit.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-10-08 03:46 PM

"I would be sunlight
to your cloud"
You are, more often than you may know.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2002-10-08 03:53 PM

Ron,
I see you're building the fire
and the bed.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2002-10-08 03:55 PM

this touches........so deeply
and all I can do is say thank you for sharing such a touching write. Thank you.....

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

11 posted 2002-10-08 04:09 PM

The epitomy of love.

How utterly, perfectly, wonderfully, grandly, superbly ~GREAT~.

Do you think I might like this?

People in here keep making me cry and making my nose run and it is not a pretty sight!

Did I say priceless? IT IS, and will be printed as soon as I stop blubbering.

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

[This message has been edited by regards2you (10-09-2002 11:18 AM).]

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

12 posted 2002-10-08 06:54 PM

ok, whew...got online long enough to comment, glad I didn't miss this...its incredible....I always say I would die happy if someone wrote poetry as this to me...so...hope the one you write to appreciates your heart

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