Open Poetry #22 |
After Effects |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
The storm is surging within Pent up frustrations The status quo will not work Stress induced constraints In total depression The winds pick you up In a meditative state Carrying you through the universe Bare feet dancing in the drizzle Free floating spirit on mind trips In everything that should be Suddenly become right Before your doubting fortitude An ecstasy of self moral boosters Sends the stress into positive thinking A revelation that absolves you, of any guilt In the revival of a relaxed persona Strength of mind To endure the force of adversity Reinforcing the intelligence of your creativity In the storms aftermath You are cleansed of your mental baggage Lightening your spirits pessimism Carrying you unhindered By combating your fears As the storm within calms to soothing smiles In whispering songs singing in your heart To a beat of such optimism In which everything blooms around you In the spring showers “after effects” D.Lester Young 10/5/2002 Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
You have quite the extensive use of language...a bit of proofreading and you can fix the mechanics that need your attention. Well done metaphor of comparing inward emotions to the seasons. Powerful read. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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