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Open Poetry #22

Life's Dicotomy

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2002-10-05 09:19 AM

a balance between attraction and detraction
a play between the whole and its parts
however accord or discord starts
think it to be only between two
like the Taming of the Shrew,
but laboured on within ourselves
tinkered solely by spirited elves?

love and hate work familiar ends
social values set new trends
play between young and old
a jostle from center folds....
like the 'Taming of the Shrew'
forces laboured between two?

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-10-05 09:22 AM

ecrivan
Good write, enjoyed the read very much.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2002-10-05 12:14 PM

a balance between attraction and detraction
a play between the whole and its parts

You manage to set the stage with conflicting contrasts and never fail to keep me on the edge of my seat.

Great work ecrivan~

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2002-10-06 01:08 AM

Thanks Blues, Sy

It could continue, but again the essence is here to continue would be padding for me

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