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Open Poetry #22

Thought Pool

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

0 posted 2002-09-27 03:26 PM

Thoughts Pool

High up

   Wayyyyyyyyyy up there

An imminent pool of effervescent depths exists

   existentially intangible,

Commingling to linger within the boundaries of blood

            Everything spoken, written, thought combined

  To trickle, dissipated, unknowingly towards

             Tumbling introspectively

The velocity of one body.

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

1 posted 2002-09-27 05:43 PM

Your "thought pool" made me think!

I enjoyed the format in which you chose to do this piece.

Enjoyed!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

2 posted 2002-10-06 01:17 AM

thanks irie!

i bet all of our thoughts just hover above the earth, like an invisible ionosphere.

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