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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2002-10-04 02:35 PM

Dance me a sonnet……….sing me a sigh
Whisper of passions……….you cannot deny
Caress me a wish……….kiss me a dream
Take my fantasies……….to the extreme
Love me a teardrop………hold me a flame
Profess your heart……….won’t be the same
Savor me a storm………. feel me a sea
Drift us to morning……….intimately

~SEA~

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-10-04 02:38 PM

Beautiful!

What was so delightful in the presentation of this poem for me, and it is probably because I am still having a problem with this site, is that I finished reading the entire poem and then the picture mysteriously appeared in it's place. Made for a lovely show.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-10-04 03:13 PM

SEA - softly, swaying.....beautiful. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-04 03:25 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love the presentation, sweet friend, may you always dance his sonnets and waltz the villanelles among destinys heavens, I love it, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-10-04 03:25 PM

Oh yes,
Dance....intimately!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-10-04 03:40 PM

Gentle
as the rain.

Sinful_Steph
Junior Member

since 2002-10-03

Posts 35
Toronto, Ontario (Canada)

6 posted 2002-10-04 03:41 PM

This was very nice. Short and sweet. I will surely be looking for more of your poetry. Thanks for sharing it, I truly enjoyed it.

"Love me little, Love me long, Is the burden of my song" - Robert Herrick

caterina
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since 2002-07-25

Posts 188
Canada

7 posted 2002-10-04 03:48 PM

This was beautiful sea, especially with the picture there, so well written. I liked, a lot.

caterina

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2002-10-04 03:51 PM

As always a splendid piece Sea....made me feel how much I missed your writing.

(((hugs)))
Charisma

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2002-10-04 04:08 PM

Completely lovely, Susan!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-10-04 04:17 PM

Oh so lovely Sue...very pretty.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2002-10-04 11:53 PM

Sea, This is so pretty. I love your writing. I will look for more of it. Thanks for sharing. With Love from Ethel...garysgirl

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

12 posted 2002-10-05 07:44 AM

This... This is good.

Thanks,
Melton

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

13 posted 2002-10-05 07:49 AM

Oh Susan, this is so beautiful. Both, the picture and the poem. I love the way you did the poem.

Radrook
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since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

14 posted 2002-10-05 07:56 AM

Nice!

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

15 posted 2002-10-05 09:03 AM

This poem dances off my lip each time I read it...aloud....the flow of the words is perfect...I wish I could say them to my true love at this every moment...and the picture, SEA...I felt myself there....looking out.

A great sonnet with a wonderful presentation.

...believe what your heart feels.....

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

16 posted 2002-10-05 11:08 AM

Classic Sea-girlie poetry...perfect.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

17 posted 2002-10-05 01:22 PM

This is hauntingly lovely and lilting. I once lived by the sea, and it has been calling me ever since. It's voice has just gotten stronger---it won't be long now 'til I return from whence I came. (Gee whiz, I sound like I'm a dolphin!) hehe

EA

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

18 posted 2002-10-07 12:30 PM

Enticing...yes...James

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

19 posted 2002-10-07 03:45 AM

I like it.

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Morgoth
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since 2001-05-21

Posts 26
Baltimore, MD

20 posted 2002-10-07 10:51 AM

Equisitely beautiful SEA. Lovely presentation and the picture has a calming effect.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

21 posted 2002-10-07 01:10 PM

I didn't realize how much I missed your inspiration ...

This is a beautiful piece, gal.

Just beautiful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

22 posted 2002-10-07 09:56 PM

Sea, it has been waaay too long since I have read anything of yours. This is a truly beautiful peice to return to. I loved it, a keeper.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater

[This message has been edited by Dee (10-07-2002 10:15 PM).]

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