Love Forever Faceless In My Dreams

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Open Poetry #22

Love Forever Faceless In My Dreams

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

0 posted 2002-10-07 09:38 PM

Love, forever faceless in my dreams,
what sacrilege was made before my cognizance
out side my door that left its mark in bloody streams
and urged your flight beyond me as its consequence?

lacking eyes she will not meet my solid gaze
which in not blinking only shine of verity,
denied of ears she'll never hear words in phrase
unwavering oaths in true emotions clarity.

Without lips how will she ever taste what's sweet
and know no bitterness in our fruited kiss?
Absent a nose what proof that naught foul will greet
nor e'er rise among our passion and it's bliss.

Love, please paint a face into my dreams
and lift whatever curse my ancestry begat,
she has a body that is really quite supreme
and we've no problem knowing what to do with that.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-07 09:39 PM

Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

2 posted 2002-10-07 09:44 PM

Beautiful and very well written.
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she has a body that is really quite supreme
and we've no problem knowing what to do with that.
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I like this part the best. I found it quite humorous, though I'm sure that's not what you intended. LOL
~Krissie

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-10-07 09:44 PM

RSWELLS, very good poetry. Thanks for sharing. I hope your dream becomes a reality for you.
Best Wishes.
Ethel...garysgirl

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