Open Poetry #22 |
The Lake |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Some might say this lake a mere pond five acres is all, and that's not a lot. But the lake holds wonders that I do behold stories I'm sure that have yet to be told. The wild rose that climbs the cottage on shore blooming up to the roof and across the porch floor. Haunted some say this house is at night the moon through the windows, a ghost of the light. Creaking and cracking at all times of day the cottage that sits on the shore of the lake. Within the water that's the color of coffee trees bare of life stand tall in the offering. A home to the birds who wake me each morning color on the trees, nature's way of adorning, the stark sentinels that have no other charm save the cardinals, bluejays, and egrets on arm. Small islands appear in the midst here and there ducks with their babies in spring everywhere enough noise to wake even the deepest in sleep there are even in season some canadian geese. All of this makes up the lake where I live the joy and the splendor that it daily gives displayed just for you with words I now write I hope that this painted a picture of sight. WhiteRose 10/04/02 "The first rule of poetry, write what you know." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you've painted a beautiful picture for me with your words "Haunted some say this house is at night the moon through the windows, a ghost of the light" I liked this image the best I think |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
I like it too White Rose It is a very nice place. But water like coffie-------? Muys |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Great photo.. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I think because this lake is flooded land, it is dirty and very mossy. And it is in fact the color of coffee, without the cream of course. Thank you all for the comments. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But you didn't even mention the leaky rowboat? LOL And after all those holes I'd laboriously carved into the bottom... LOL This is really beautiful, Rosie... I could almost smell the roses. *S* You done good! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
suthern..You remembered the leaky row boat!! It's patched now. So don't be carving no more holes in there, ya hear. Thanks so much for you comments. |
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