Open Poetry #22 |
Waiting For You |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“WAITING FOR YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Three days, three weeks, three months, lonely days carry on through space… Yet they pass, one by one, by another… Closer to be, until your gentle embrace… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Yes, and I know soon the wait will always be over and without a times end love will be yours to cherish forever! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-03-2002 10:34 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
BC~I wish you all the best when she arrives. Lovely write. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill Sounds like a sweet anticipation. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
don't worry dear...i will be there soon...helen |
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caterina Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 188Canada |
This was lovely Bill. I liked how you took the days, weeks and months and narrowed it right down to that embrace. Short poems are always a challenge and I think this one is really well done. caterina |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Waiting can be unbearable, but anticipation can be awe inspiring. Or in this case..poetically inspiring. Wonderful write! You are, as always, the CHARMER!! Tammy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Seems like I'm always waiting...James |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC ~~ I hope she comes to you soon. Waiting can be so difficult. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It has been an experience that good things come to those who wait. Well done Bill. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Some say, "Out of sight, out of mind". Others say, "Absence makes the heart grow fonder". I think you and I agree with what the "others" say. You're reunion should well be worth the wait! EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Compliments to your warm style and gentle feelings. Sounds like a brew to be perfected in the future...nearer than farther my friend. ThisDiamond |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Simply beautiful Bill! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Absence makes the heart grow fonder...and one's mind does wander...good write Bill |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, my Gary and I have a long distance relationship. It is well worth the wait when we do get to see each other, though. I liked the way you put it into such a few words. Your poems sound like they are really from the heart. Thanks. Ethel |
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