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The Word of the Day
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The Word of the Day |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The Word of the Day I see too much of the lives around me, having none, wishing for naught, those days over, as one journey begins its end. I feel too much of the regrets of yesterday, having too many, knowing more are to come, as each new day arrives, and creates a path for me. I know too much, yet not enough, still wearing the cloak of hurt, sometimes of shame, but mostly of a love that seems to be going nowhere. I take you off and drag you around, the heaviness draining... the roots of love feeling evil, as my mind plays tricks on me, fools me into believing even though I see the storm clouds ahead, drawing me towards them needing the lightning to strike so my eyes become alert, needing the thunder to roll, so I hear only the moments passing of a life waiting for the calm, hoping, for when relief is the word of the day. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-04-2002 01:51 PM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This one finds it easy to relate to lines within this piece...well done! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice word for the day my friend... hope you do indeed find it soon... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A good strong write, enjoyed. And the word for the day is peace.  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Take a deep breath and feel the calm. This is well-written. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Virginia..I know some days are like that..it is drizzling here and kind of dark and we are expecting a thunderstorm. I actually love them...the electricity in the air gives me energy. *s M C..it is just Me...feeling the day out, I am relieved many times during a day..I sigh alot, too... sometimes too much making me dizzy. Just teasing, I am fine  Seymour, yes I think peace is a nice word for the day..and it is so quiet here, I can hear my own heart beating. Thanks and hugs M Good Morning Nan, thank you for stopping by. I still am working on the FLA. poems but there was so much that went on..this is just an in between poem.  M |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is wonderful. Nicely done! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I can relate to this.....How do "I" spell relief?....I think I'll find it in my grave. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
WR thank you Toe, well I am hoping to find relief long before my end comes...but one never knows... M |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Much peace to you, Maureen. The calm will come. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
At breath, for the storm. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
many favorite lines take you off and drag you around...nice |
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