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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Life is an illusion: just an impression painting itself over and over again just like a highway with green trees on its sides the red setting sun at its end and we are riding, towards brightness attracted to joy claiming small victories when light falls on our faces when the road is straight and shedding tears when the light slants away and the road begins to curl and in the winding and unwinding of the spiralling thread we breathe our airs of personal import with the great urge to live as in dreams which by themselves are nothing but illusions: just impressions of life painting themselves over and over again [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (09-30-2002 10:11 AM).] |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
simple yet deep thoughts...i liked this, Sudhir...all on the simple journey with same destination...yet, so many hurdles & bumps on our way...thanks for sharing...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Good thoughts, good write, good read, enjoyed |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
superb imaging! absolutely lovely writing may I share with a local poet? Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Moonlight Romeo 
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
With a wave of the wand, there it is. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sudhir, I like the small victories in this poem. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yes, oh Sudhir, such wisdom flows from your heart, the beauty of life should always be measured in small victories, for if life was just one big goal and judged as a pass or fail, it would be a complete waste of time! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, may every day bring you great blessings, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
claiming small victories when light falls on our faces when the road is straight and shedding tears when the light slants away your poetry is always a pleasure to read, and this one is no different. Enjoyed the read. Don't drag the orchestra into this thing |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent. I so enjoy your work. Bravo! ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It is such a pleasure to read you Sudhir. Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all so very much... I can now claim my small victory Regards to all, Sudhir |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
bump to the top so more will enjoy this one! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot James regards, sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just like a song...good work |
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