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Treat You Right
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Treat You Right |
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Street Poet Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 82 |
Girl I'll treat you right I'll take you out and show you the town tonight Treat you like a queen As I open the doors, and pull out your seat All this at the same time while I make sure we stay neat I'll give you compliments about your hair and feet Make you feel good inside As we ride in my nice ride Take a walk by the ocean And watch nature do its work Listen to tell me about a woman's worth 10 is the rating I give this date in numbers Looking into each others eyes Which is a signal that we will be future lovers Take you home, walk you to the door And I ask can we date some more, you say yes Which is my reward Cause girl I treat you right |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Hello and Welcome to PIP! Sorry if I didn't welcome you before. I've been offline a few days now. I just felt I had to stop by and say "hello". There are some very nice sentiments in this poem. It is true that if you "treat" a woman "right" she will tend to keep coming back for more. I hope your repeat date went as well as the first one. Good luck!! Tammy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It could work...James |
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