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Don't say that .,,,,,,,, |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
In your eyes I got those feelings Can you imagine the love I gets My whole life is nothing without your smiles My heart stops without your throbs Your are the only one I gets Don’t say that I can live without your loves Don’t say that I can forget every things You are Living deep inside my eyes I love you and this is the only word I have in my dictionaries Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) [This message has been edited by secretlife (10-02-2002 01:33 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Interesting word play. The content is so much more serious and deeper than the presentation. I like the experiment of it. Good write. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is so beautifully sensitive and heartfelt, sweet friend, I wish you the best happiness with your love as you are so deserving of it! (smiles) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Thank you all for ur sweet opinion I am very glad to know that you like my modest words.. Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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