Rendezvous dans la pensée

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Open Poetry #22

Rendezvous dans la pensée

haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

0 posted 2002-10-02 01:39 PM

It's the high escape
That surrenders the mind,
To a state of placid dreams
Of tomorrow.
Your words whispered whitely,
Which drenches me
Like rain drops warm
From heaven.
On my mind drips and bubbles
As champagne savored
and daffodils sitting
On white clothe tables.
Music jazzing a mood
Beyond description,
For you are the perfect
Prescription.
A moment it takes to write a this
But forever it will take to erase it.

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

[This message has been edited by haydenjames (10-02-2002 01:41 PM).]

caterina
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 188
Canada

1 posted 2002-10-02 01:52 PM

This was a delightful read. Loved the champagne, daffodils, bubbles and everthing. Refreshing.

caterina

Daniel van Vliet
Member

since 2001-08-31

Posts 80

2 posted 2002-10-02 06:17 PM

....great use of images

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2002-10-02 06:27 PM

Nicely done, James, enjoyed the read...

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2002-10-02 06:40 PM

'raindrops warm from heaven'-that's a lovely line. Wonderful images in this one.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-10-04 04:16 AM

Like this...James

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