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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2002-10-03 02:04 PM



Slowly sin
If sin it be
To flow with touch
On another

Tensile strength
Measurable in sensitive tips
Trying to release
Bond of one
Against

Seconds space
Swirl traced
Encounter

Slowly
Build on slow
Candid exposure

Sensations
Severed from sanity

Slowly sin
If sin
It be

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-10-03 02:31 PM


Cpat,
Clever, enjoyed the read.


bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-10-03 02:39 PM


If sin it be,
send to
P
I
P

Love the slow exposure here, Ron,
and the feelings bonding.

wranx
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3 posted 2002-10-03 03:08 PM


Slow tactile tracings.

Yessir.


~Ed

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4 posted 2002-10-03 03:30 PM


Velvet.


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-10-03 03:38 PM


Smooooth and sensual.
Much enjoyed.

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Martie
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6 posted 2002-10-03 03:53 PM


Ron

smooth as honey...sensual, slow pour of words.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2002-10-06 09:20 PM



I enjoyed this...
slowly!

garysgirl
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8 posted 2002-10-06 11:00 PM


I enjoyed your poem. Thanks,
Ethel

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Gaia
9 posted 2002-10-06 11:20 PM


Well, this proves high tech and high touch are not incompatible.
You touched me with this one.

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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2002-10-07 01:27 PM


Oh, you rascal, you!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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11 posted 2002-10-08 01:23 PM


wow, this is wonderfully spilled down the page...tempting the reader to be tasted again and again...
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