Open Poetry #22 |
Tactile |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Slowly sin If sin it be To flow with touch On another Tensile strength Measurable in sensitive tips Trying to release Bond of one Against Seconds space Swirl traced Encounter Slowly Build on slow Candid exposure Sensations Severed from sanity Slowly sin If sin It be |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat, Clever, enjoyed the read. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
If sin it be, send to P I P Love the slow exposure here, Ron, and the feelings bonding. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Slow tactile tracings. Yessir. ~Ed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Velvet. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Smooooth and sensual. Much enjoyed. ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron smooth as honey...sensual, slow pour of words. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I enjoyed this... slowly! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed your poem. Thanks, Ethel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, this proves high tech and high touch are not incompatible. You touched me with this one. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oh, you rascal, you! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow, this is wonderfully spilled down the page...tempting the reader to be tasted again and again... |
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