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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-10-06 03:20 PM




Sisters Of The Heart


             

I found such truth held in your words
I could feel the warmth of your smile
it mattered not the amount of distance
that came between us through the miles.

Their was an air of honesty about you
that I could sense from here to there
and I knew that God had sent an angel
for with which my soul could share.

I’ve sensed it from that first moment
I’ve certainly known it from the start
that we were more than just mere friends
we would always be sisters of the heart.



(Dedicated with }



If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-06-2002 03:53 PM).]

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-10-06 03:29 PM


AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH, Gentle Spirit, this is so beautiful. You have such a loving heart and "gentle spirit". Thank you for sharing your heart.
Love,
Ethel...garysgirl

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
2 posted 2002-10-06 04:48 PM


Sometimes friends make even better sisters. This is a nice poem for your friend Donna.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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3 posted 2002-10-06 05:03 PM


you are and have always been a Sister of Heart to me....you inspire...luv you.....
Lauren~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-10-06 06:41 PM


Donna..this is just so perfectly beautiful!!
What a truly 'gentle spirit' you are!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2002-10-06 06:45 PM



This is so very, very true, Donna.  This particular website has been more than a poet's haven to myself...and I am sure I could speak for many sisters, AND brothers, of the heart...

This IS one huge family of poets...and we can even argue...meaningfully...and come back...to open arms.

Home.  What a nice place to be...

among family.

regards2you
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6 posted 2002-10-06 07:05 PM


How precious. My best friend is 3,000+ miles away from me in Ann Arbor, and she has been more of a sister to me than the combination of my four sisters, including my twin, were.

I can so relate. I wrote a poem:
but not published yet...(posted)

A Real Friend Is Priceless

in part it goes....

  a real friend is almost magical
as though it were written on the wind
before either of you were born.
It is as if you are related, somehow,
somewhere, not by genes, but by something much stronger, connected to
your very souls....
............
.....................

......a real friend is priceless
      so few and far between.

Thanks for reminding of a very special relationship.. nicely done

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2002-10-08 01:18 PM


Donna, this was so incredibly lovely. Your friend is fortunate to have one in you. She must have been very pleased with this.

Funny thing is that, as I read this poem, I realized that this is how I felt about you and I as well. The writing of our poem "Free Spirit" drew you and I closer and so many of the sentiments that you wrote about in this poem, I feel about you and our new found friendship!

Linda

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8 posted 2002-10-08 01:26 PM




(smiles) Oh Donna, you truly are a sister in spirit to all our hearts, sweet friend, I love Passions so much because many here are like brothers and sisters to me and I will always be your brother in spirit! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet firend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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