Open Poetry #22 |
Exploration |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I remember your exploration of skin. Enjoying the topography of my body placed upon palm, etched as sweat in droplets escaped the pores. Now the memory of me is forever a part of your touch, imprinted upon your hands for future reference. WhiteRose |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
WR, this really made me smile in remembering the same feelings expressed once or twice in my own poems M |
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caterina Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 188Canada |
You have a nice gentle way with words White Rose, this was lovely. caterina |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have a compelling way with words that makes me want to read your poems twice or more! ~ and may he never forget this sweet rose of white! ~ EA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
WhiteRose - warm this is, nice tender words... BC |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
Oh I like where this one took my head. I must go explore some topography now. Thanks for sharing. Tom |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Nice piece! I like the use of the word "topography". It works well here!!!!! Kris Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I too love the topographical sense you give your words! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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