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Open Poetry #22
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DonFurr
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0 posted 2002-10-02 11:33 PM


Under the surface
within the shine
Spread in layers
of love so fine
Such a brilliant gem
your breath will start
When you finally view
an Angels heart

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1 posted 2002-10-02 11:38 PM

"Under the surface
within the shine
Spread in layers
of love so fine"

very very nice.....
this part makes me think of the ocean
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