Open Poetry #22 |
NO FEAR! |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I've faced a bull, Showed no fear. Verbally wrestled With Balladeer. Fought Vietcong (There I was scared) Bullets and bombs Everywhere Gone up against Surgeons with knives So many times I've risked my life I've fought in the streets Won and lost Win or lose There is a cost One thing I fear Can't keep it hidden, It's the horror I've found Of scornful women. [This message has been edited by Toerag (10-01-2002 12:32 PM).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
...then play nice.... enjoyed this dear Toe! |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Indeed sir, "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned". |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I can't help but be curious as to what prompted this write. Was it something I said? hehe Well, one thing is for certain, if you've faced the Vietcong and Balladeer, you certainly can take the heat from women, afterall, don't you regard us as the weaker sex? haha P.S. This poem has me wondering what you might have done to incur the wrath of women? Personally, I think you are a sweetie pie! EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Note to Toe: No need to fear, dear... though if I recollect correctly, that bull certainly earned your respect the hard way! LOL Any woman who'd be scornful of you isn't really female... it's just Balladeer playing the imposter again. LOL Now we may be scornful of each other... but that's another poem altogether! LOL I like this very much, sweets... |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Toe, I HAD to read this after I saw the title. My friends call me "the girl with NO FEAR". And ah yes, be warned Fear the women scorned! ~Sheri |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, I would you know your heel from your toe But about women I just don't know. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Sea...I always play nice with ladies..unless they prefer naughty? INclan...Hell's like a moderate day in Alabama compared to a woman's scorn for sure Earthie one...I wrote this a few years ago after a bout I had with a friend's bull that got loose....just never posted it...but, a scorned woman and that bull were comparable.And thanks for the "sweetie" comment sweetie. Suthern...I still "recollect" the bull everytime I feel that "pain" in my ribs....and I'll work on that Balladeer poem... Irie....you have no fear?...Have you ever woken up in the middle of the night with Toerag laying next to you?....(ya wanna) Sy....I know heel from Toe....and I know Woe from women....Toe knows yanno? [This message has been edited by Toerag (10-01-2002 02:11 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
There's much sizzle in this verse (Now that the street fights have dispersed) That bull may sizzle on some grill (If at Ruth’s Chris, you’ll have some bill!) And poor Bal sizzles in frustration That he’s lacking your persuasion With ladies sizzling with passion... You’ve quite a sizzling poem fashioned! ROFL... Now aren't you glad I didn't try to work the surgeons into this lil ditty? LOL Did I mention that I like your poem LOTS? *G* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Toe - good one. Keep your back to the wall when a woman scorned enters a room!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Toe, you're funny! I can't say that I have! ~Sheri |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Oh how much truth there is in this... LOL Such a fruity fresh topic these days too Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Be careful what you say or do.. I just might cast a spell on you!! Heh heh...never fear... I think you are a sweetheart! ~Big Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Poor Toe! I know you are forlorn But what can you expect but scorn? Your nose hairs reach your bottom lip The way you scratch yourself ain't hip Your burps sound out for many miles Three days of food shows in your smiles You need to find a different gang.. Next time try an orangutang!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Never mind that 'Deer, Toe.... He's just jealous!! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Yes, that jealous complexion indeed hides behind that smile! LOL! Just kidding! (big hugggsssss) This is delightful, sweet firend, now kiss and make up, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Toerag - scornful women hey? I can intro you to one that you wouldn't believe. You do tell it like it is, I like it... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am just too tired to reply in like form...but I sure enjoy the responses you get from others M |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Thank you all for the kind replies...yea, you too Balladeer....your time is coming soon however.... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
You have learned well my friend. Never deal with a scorned woman. Puts the fear into every man. And we are so good at it. Hugs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
no danger poses more of a threat than a woman scorned...treat them all with respect and deference...and live long... good write toerag ...believe what your heart feels..... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
, then you should always be a gentleman. I never scorn a gentleman, they are treasured. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
... Anybody seen a big Toe running loose around here?... |
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