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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
peace passive spirit innocent in its love close your eyes sang the lullaby rest C2002SimplyGold |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, aren't you on a roll! Another golden one! EA |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Wonderful job. Really enjoyed this. thanks.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this brought a tear to my eye because I think this would make a beautiful lullaby for a parents love to her child and thinking of children as God's little angels deeply touches my heart! (sigh) This is lightly touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
SG this is simply beautiful. Well done! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Earth Angel, You got me going. Dare I try a Senryu? Not yet however, I'm certainly enjoying yours. Thank you. Miah, thank you for the encouragement. Noah, You humble me. Gently Spirit, thank you so much for peeking in and your kind comment.  to allSG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
I'm not sure this would qualify as a cinquian because the first and last words are not two syaballes? Expertise please? Comment? SG |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I'm not an expert in formal poetry, Electra... so I can't tell you whether or not this is a cinquian... but it is very beautifully written. Why don't you post it in the critical analysis forum... you might get some advice there... ~ neighborly hugsLyra |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Electra, this is wonderful. So pretty. Thanks. With Love To All, Ethel |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you Garysgirl for your reply. Madame C. So glad you're back. I'll take your advise. Missed you. SG |
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