Open Poetry #22 |
I will miss... |
Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I will miss the way you looked at me when I was who you loved I will miss the nicknames laughing in bars your being my poetry I will miss talking on the phone even though it still made me nervous I will miss coming home and finding you waited up I will miss taking finger from lips and touching your picture I will miss telling you goodnight good morning and about my day I will miss holding the key to the most loving heart I’ve ever known I will miss the perfect days awkward moments and a half dozen good-byes I will miss every moment of every heartbeat shared Thank you for the best parade ever I will miss… you. Still, what had been shared, would not |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This makes me think of my Liam. Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - very touching write, it must have been a very special someone... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Duncan, this sounds so beautiful but sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, always cherish these memories just as I know true love will find a way to your golden heart! (sigh) Keep your chin up, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Yes, I knew her well - she was a very special person indeed. Of course, i never met her, but that's besides the point, isn't it. D - you sum up much in this, touching on but a few of the myriad of things that comprise a person and a relationship. In every one, you've touched me with remembrance and association. I just hope that someday we can learn to miss only the missing, eh? Peace, C |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Duncan, you did a very good job of describing how it feels to lose someone. I hope you have found a "forever love" now. You have a loving spirit and it shows in your work. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel....garysgirl |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I like: "when I was who you loved" simply put, but, powerful...wow.. thanks, Pat without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very sad...so sorry |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I will miss every moment of every heartbeat shared Thank you for the best parade ever ====================== the "honorary moth" earns his wings the hard way.... but as always, does it with sincerety and class. heart-hugs dunc ... *tis not easy being a moth* *sigh* In the space between now and then |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I'm very moved D. Sigh...amazing isn't it - trying to narrow the pain into the columns on the screen, or on the page...it just funnels the pain somewhere else until it comes near again... hugs to you K |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
again..you capture so well the words to describe the things inside.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This...is perfect..but oh so sad, I know these feelings... Gawd this hurts.... ~Heart-hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
'I will miss taking finger from lips and touching your picture' ~This has me. oh,...sigh. The entire thing. *Peace you. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
oh, this made me sad. A lovely piece, so filled with feelings. I will miss..yes, you will. A very soft write. Enjoyed |
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