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Left to be unnoticed |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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Left to be Unnoticed never to be seen wonder what is wrong with me mistakes are made that is a common trend but no one points them out to me and tries to make me bend just left to wonder what is wrong how long will this go on ignored like a literal bore my own passions not meet everything I have is spent topics typed yet I see no light This empty feeling resounds with echoes of my own voice bouncing back and forth with no others simple communication causing the mind to lose its simple yet clever inventions Thomas aka Rogue |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Noticed and commended! Perchance the poet must first love himself? ThisDiamond  |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Irie noticed! And I am left a bit intrigued. Is this about posts here at PIP getting lost in the pages beyond with little or no response? I guess before I know for sure what this actually meant, all I can say for now is it is hard to go unnoticed, no matter what it is. ~Sheri |
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Hearts_Dance Junior Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 31 |
I noticed! This poem that is. So I wonder, what this really means. That I am not sure, but there seems to be a lot of let down in this, or so I feel it anyhow. I hope you find the recognition you are looking for. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
on expressing your need to feel comfortable with yourself..poetry is a good way to express pent up feelings, frustrations..the good and the bad too. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You're not alone, if that makes you feel any better, as this particular verse did for me.. This empty feeling resounds with echoes of my own voice bouncing back and forth with no others simple communication causing the mind to lose its simple yet clever inventions |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
A slow building rumble starts to began a resounding noise that makes me feel a surge of excitment that I am finally heard LOL Thank yall |
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