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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-10-01 10:05 AM


Best of Friends
~By Sue~

It has been a dream all my life
To have a horse I could call my own
I would ride out in the sunshine
All day long by myself alone

My horse and I would best of friends
We would have a mutual understanding
If she did happen to get spooked
She would not send me a flying

Once in a while underneath a big tree
We would rest underneath a shade
Planning our next big adventure
Our path with would carefully pave

We would find us a secret spot
Together she and I would be
As she took me to the places
I would really like to go see

To reward her for her efforts
An apple I would give her everyday
For the journey she took me on
To brighten up my day

10-1-02


© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
ThUnDeRkYsS
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1 posted 2002-10-01 10:32 AM


My mother will love this, I am going to show her when I get home tonight   She shares your love for horses, what a great depiction of the care and companionship here.

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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-10-01 10:38 AM


SmartChick
A lovely write, enjoyed the read.

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3 posted 2002-10-01 11:09 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I have always loved horses so much and while I am one of the worst horseback riders! (LOL!) I do love their company so much and I feel they are brothers and sisters to us spiritually! (big hugggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-10-01 11:39 AM


Sue, it seems we have shared the same dream---but it was so touching to see this fantasy of mine actually put down in words via your wonderful poem!

This was an unexpected treat!

~ May your dream, become your reality! ~

Linda

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