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Swimming Pool |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Swimming Pool In the pool of blue Floating flying Across the water Drifting In and out of dreams Remembering Childhood that I once had The sunlight dancing And changing All the colours From blue To greeney blue Ripples are small And light How I remember When I was small Playing laughing Splashing In the water Of this pool of blue I open my eyes And then I realised That childhood Lives forever Within us all Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Hearts_Dance Junior Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 31 |
Krissy, I remember days like this. What fun they were. And you are right they all live in us forever. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yay!!! And I know with a true loving golden heart as yours you are bound to find true happiness always and the spirit of innocence in you will draw great sunshine to your life as you nurture the child in you! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"...that childhood lives forever within us all." ---and delightful poems such as this one, help to bring back those memories to your readers. Thank you! EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah such happy childhood memories you conjured up with this delight!! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
It lives and you remind us of it so very well. I guess you wrote this in the afternoon, huh Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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MiniGuitarMan Junior Member
since 2002-09-01
Posts 26Florida |
KrissyChildOfMyHeart~ YOU are such a true delight~ I can't wait for you ALL to come back over here and bring the little pieces of my heart that I scattered about the VILLA~  MarshaLove ... you is da' bestest !! Kethry ... you are soooooooooooooo shy and retiring~ LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOO (whoops)  Night girls ... Now TURN OFF THE DANGED LIGHTS ! LOL LOL LOL LOO~ We love you ALL~ ~*Marge & Bill*~ |
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Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169 |
ooOOoo, I always love poems that are delightful to read for the heart. And this is one of those poems. Thank you for sharing this! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nice to see the mellow side of you, Krissy...FOR THE FIRST TIME!!! |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
I liked this. Childhood has left me forever, I think. Friggin responsibility wont let it come back and visit. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Now don't you mind that Balladeer Krissy, he barely survived that trip to the Cypres Gardens LOL You've written a beautiful poem here. I MISS YOU ALL!!!!!!! Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krissy, this has such a serene sense of tranquillity, which is surprising since it was nothing akin to the poets meets, which was bedlam... Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Kethry's right... this is serene and tranquil and very relaxing... just what I needed at the end of a long day. *S* Great write, Krissy! *S* |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Krissy, This is calm and wonderful. I like it! Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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