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0 posted 2002-10-01 06:41 PM


Girl I'm waitin on you
Like people wait on night to sleep and day to wake up
Waitin on your love
Like old folks for medication or stressed people for a vacation
I can't lie sometimes I get restless
Always seeing girls who judge you by the size of your necklace
But I know when I meet you its gon be all good
Cause your the main thing that can take me out the hood
I think about you like all day
Its kind of funny fantasing about someone I never seen before
But It's coo cause when I meet you my jaw gon hit the floor
Because my heart tells me so
Sometimes I wonder if you wondering about me
Even if you never saw me before
I guarantee I can give you all my love and some more
In my mind I live valentine's everyday
Now I'm waitin on you to make it a reality
In these hard times hopes of meeting you make me happy
This is a letter to a girl of who I have no clue
Girl I'm waitin on you



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1 posted 2002-10-01 06:44 PM


I like this style and the sentiments are sweet I like the livin valentines everyday part....
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