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Alicethruglass
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since 2001-06-19
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0 posted 2002-10-07 04:28 PM



I've left myself, behind it all
my visions brailled for none to see.
To feel as I do, one must touch
the softer inner part of me.

I fall from fear, let time decide
with answers none, I heal but scarred.
I go alone for all to know
I've left behind, a mirror marred.

The window panes are filmed with thoughts
with finger pen, the words are scrawled.
The You of You that once was mine
is clinging, filmed on inside, walled.

I understand, this is not me,
a fragment of, is all you'll see
I drive myself along the edge
of loneliness, my life in pledge.

I love the tallness of the tree
its ample height begs me to climb.
I've left myself, behind it all
wondering if, I've wasted time.

Each piece of me, I shine for you
so clear of me, that comes with light
But from the shadows, darkness plays
a Wynter's dream, throughout the night.

I am but she, in make-believe,
Her nakdthoughts of real expressed
of patience  flowered, one last time.
She asks of you to be her guest.

If so, an answer needed she
Reunion waits, reflections old
of years in passing, of friendships might
the new of memories, in treasured hold.

~A~


[This message has been edited by Alicethruglass (10-07-2002 05:20 PM).]

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-10-07 04:32 PM


I know you're not in your best moods
when Alice appears,
but I'm glad she has!

Wonderful rhythm,
and wise information here.

Thanks for sharing this!

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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2 posted 2002-10-07 06:58 PM


I loved this.

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

The Crimson Knight
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since 2002-09-16
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3 posted 2002-10-07 07:29 PM


Hey Alice like the flow of this, but as for letting time decide, well, I don’t know sometime it hard to be patient
brian madden
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ireland
4 posted 2002-10-07 08:11 PM


If so, an answer needed she
Reunion waits, reflections old
of years in passing, of friendships might
the new of memories, in treasured hold.


some wonderful lines Alice, enjoyed this alot.

El riesgo vive siempre!

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