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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Symbiosis I’m riding a train to nowhere. Part paid but surely not full fare It’s brought me to a bank of shrouds With interest rates above the clouds A force that sends me to and fro A course that I don’t really know It bends and sends me sweep of hand Deep within desires land And there I have a pick and choose It’s more or less I win or lose But never the less I am there And subject to a source of dare. I play the game as well I can There’s not and never was a plan And little left but weary light To bright the shadows of my night Night has over powered me for I only see periphery. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Symbiosis? Did you get bit by one of them mosquitos?....Interesting write Sigh...hope your day goes well.....(Forget about that bank with the high interest rates..I'll make ya a loan for free...how much ya needs...five dollars?...Ten? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I knew I should have waited until my coffee was done before I poked my nose into this'n. Okay, my first has only to do with the title--a word I've loved since a shrink told me once that me and the husband have a symbiotic relationship. *cocking my head sideways as I read the definition* Yep, grin, I think BOTH of the following apply, perhaps the first gives me more wicked satisfaction, though.  sym·bi·o·sis Pronunciation Key (smb-ss, -b-) n. pl. sym·bi·o·ses (-sz) 1. Biology. A close, prolonged association between two or more different organisms of different species that may, but does not necessarily, benefit each member. 2.A relationship of mutual benefit or dependence. Come to think of it, the whole poem pretty much sums it up. (I know, I know, I interpret too personally, but you DO happen to be seymour the mystic!) Now...ah, coffee's ready! Love to ya, sy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Your a man after my own heart. LOL literally Thank you Toe. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Aha - A totally different twist from my take on this word - I love it, Sy..  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, With a little liberty it can be applied to the human personality. Correct when you say. "A close, prolonged association between two or more different organisms of different species that may, but does not necessarily, benefit each member." One is what you want and the other is what you get. LOL Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Love me love my twist. LOL Hope all is well. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*choking on my coffee* "Randy" must be awake! Tell the darlin' I said g'morning! ROFL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love the morning read Sy! I'm not going to try to analize it..just enjoy. It's far too early in the day for that.  ~Smiles & hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! "I play the game as well as I can"---yes, you do!---and very well at that! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, I'll pass it to Randy, thank you love. Enchantress Thank you for the read and the good morning. I wish you the most pleasant of days.  Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Why thank you dear, love you too.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You can twist my symbols all the time... err, wait... is that what I meant? Ah Sy, will you take a smile and a wink?  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And your friendship truly is a dependence that is beneficial to all our hearts like the smile a butterfly brings, sweet friend, this is another gem to add to your collection, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The down, the up, the fast enough the place we stride the kiss goodbye all the songs we sing off key can look again see harmony so in a sense can we relate the fence without the garden gate Thanks Sy for your eye!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A smile and a wink is just fine. Noah, Always enjoy your comments, thank you. Martie, Thank you sweet. |
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