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A Rainbows End
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A Rainbows End |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Rainbows End I sat at the end of a rainbow Looking for each treasures treasure Rubbing lamps and wishing pleasure Until the wind began to blow When I stopped to looked around I saw the trees in shadows dance The leaves were twisting in a prance Yet I could not hear a sound. It’s when the leaves began to fall They whirled and spun into the sky And fluttered like a butterfly And as they did I heard a call A velvet voice that steered a broom Graced my ears and cleared the haze And there my mind left rainbows gaze As sunlight chased the weave of loom I would have liked a clearings tend For now I’ve lost the meanings end. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful morning read Sy! Was that perhaps my voice you heard steering that broom? I raise my cup of tea to you this morning. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Not to worry.  |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
You may be in a quandary about the meaning but the colorful picture produced from your words isn't lost on me. Simply lovely, Sey. When you think you have heard it all, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chanson Thank you |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy ~~ this was so beautiful. Not to worry if you got lost ~~ I loved all the words, especially these: '... I sat at the end of a rainbow Looking for each treasures treasure Rubbing lamps and wishing pleasure Until the wind began to blow ...' Sometimes we need to just ramble along and let the wind take us wherever... Hugs, Marti |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It's when the leaves began to fall They whirled and spun into the sky And fluttered like a butterfly And as they did I heard a call A velvet voice that steered a broom Graced my ears and cleared the haze And there my mind left rainbows gaze As sunlight chased the weave of loom I would have liked a clearings tend For now I've lost the meanings end. ============================ Look at Stinky playing with his ryhmes  love the rhyme scheme of this one Sy-babes....and the imagery of this bittersweet beauty as well.... trust me..ya havent lost a thing ...me thinks ya can write the end and its meaning and everything in between. Your poetry is the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow  *ww*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, Thank you for the read and sweet comments. JM, When you reply I can only sigh. WWRS  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I wondered where my broom went...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Good morning. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Would ya' look at the rhyme scheme in this one ??????? Fantabulous ! Don't worry about losing the ending .... I think it just may be in the 'pot of gold'~ Ya' think ? I do ! You precious leprechaun poet, you !! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, Thank you for the read and comment. Marge, No doubt about it, you are a delight. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is powerful, I love it, you always write such deep provocative thoughts out so well! (big hugggssssss) Now run and catch that pot at the end of the rainbow, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - at the end of the rainbow the treasure is there. Nice write, enjoyed it... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Enjoyed your comment, thank you. Bill, Glad you enjoyed, thank you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
What? Sy? What are you doing with Sun's broom? Ya went and dun it again, didn't ya? Yet another of your classic poems, with the rhyme and meter to add to the touch... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Thank you barry and I see you have been busy. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Seymour, this is a beauty of a read... The imagery is precious... SmilesNhugs2uPoetFriend *~Coco~* |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Thanks for your colorful imagination and painting such a lovely rainbow, full of the mystery and intrigue that rainbows are. |
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