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Terpsichore's Garden
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Terpsichore's Garden By: Noah Eaton 8/17/02 Click your heels, close your eyes Trespass the en passant by suprise Sweetheart, open your eyes And sing to me... With your iris plume Your sighs can cast typhoons Your kiss is like the delicate honeydew How must I sing to Thee? How do you make the fawns chase the butterflies and frolic? How do you open the windows of the orchids? How do the nymphs envy your charisma? I swear, in your garden I'll never rid of this rainbow insomnia... Whirl on your pedestal, with your plectrum On the Kendal green I'll suntan in your spectrum Limber in the lilacs with your lilluputian lullabyes Let me lick the spoon of Achelous And taste the symphonies of the sirens Angelic vampires that you gently curse me with... Take me out dancing tonight Take me out dancing tonight We'll have a blood bath in the sunset skyline Take me out dancing tonight Whirl in my Zephyr Whirl in my Zephyr Softly in your muse I will tremble and quiver Synthesizing the Pandean pipes to your listener supporting I'll whirl in your orchestra of pleasure Click your heels, close your eyes Trespass the en passant by suprise Sweetheart, open your eyes And sing to me... How must I sing to Thee? My Muse of undefined beauty...[/i] "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-17-2002 09:02 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah,you seem to know so much about all the myths, and goddesses. I love your word play here. Sandra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very creative Noah...extremely vibrant verbs and wishes. ThisDiamond |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - you write with intensity, with love, with yourself. Excellent write my friend... BC |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
awesome, back up you go like that soaring goddess!  SS |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Awesome write sidekick!! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah You write with such passion, with eyes that fill up and explode with wonder. Beautiful expression here. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fantastic stuff, love the phrase "rainbow insomnia" are you sure you haven't just borrowed someone's picture and you're really 93 with the wealth of knowledge that that many years have brought to you? Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Noah, you pen the sweetest of things... *hugs* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
MA, your writing is EXQUISITE! Hugs2uAlwaysPoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Noah Cold hands means a warm heart |
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